Drafting/planning/organisation of my magazine layout, photography and article

Here I have made changes to the front page and contents page.
On the front page I have changed the cover line on the left hand side from 'LIZZY GRIF V FEST 2014 RUMOURS' to 'LIZZY GRIF V FEST 2014 LINE UP'. 
I have also made the picture of my main artist bigger so that it fills the front cover of my magazine more.

On the contents page I have changed the numbers of the pages. 
Instead of the pages only going up to 12, they now go up to 44.

I will now continue to make changes to my double page spread to ensure I make my magazine the best it can be using my feedback on the first draft.